"Betrayed" - Inhaltsangabe in englisch

[Buffy_Summers]

Ich habe das Buch "Betrayed" auf englisch gelesen und soll dazu eine Inhaltsangabe schreiben. Es wäre lieb, wenn sich der eine oder andere meinen Text mal durchließt und mir Fehler unter die Nase hällt.


The book “Betrayed“ is written by Carl Taylor.
Thomas Walker is a new pupil at the boardingschool “Hartland”. On his first day he meets the teacher John Clay, who is also new. This school looks nice and peaceful, but there are students being unfriendly and playing nasty pranks on the new students like pouring water over their heads while they are asleep as a welcome ritual. Bradley is the rudest of them and works in the school pub, where he takes the money for himself. The German teacher Peter Hansen tries to catch Bradley to charge him for the crime. On a meeting, the headmaster desides, that the money of the pub has to be controlled by a comitee. So Bradley deales with drugs to earn money. However, Hansen and Clay know this, because Thomas told. But the headmaster doesn’t react: There is no proof!
Finally the headmaster dismisses the two teachers, supposedly the school hasn’t enough money to keep them. Also Brad wants to avenge himself on Thomas for the betrayed.
“Betrayed” – a book with an open end.


Danke!

 

[Ling]

Okay there it goes, aber bitte ohne Gewehr.

The book “Betrayed“ was written by Carl Taylor.
Thomas Walker is a new pupil at the boarding school “Hartland”. On his first day he meets the teacher John Clay, who is also new. This school looks nice and peaceful, but some of the students are acting unfriendly and are playing nasty pranks on new students like pouring water over their heads while they are asleep as a kind of awelcome ritual. Bradley stands out as the rudest student. There is no other like him. He works in for the school pub, where he's keeping most of the the money for himself. The German teacher Peter Hansen tries to reveal Bradley's doing and tries to charge him for the crime. At a meeting the headmaster desides, that the earned money of the pub should be checked by a comitee. In order to cover his criminal actions Bradley deals with drugs to earn money. However Hansen and Clay get to know this because Thomas told them the truth about Bradley. But the headmaster can't do anything just because there is no proof.
Finally the headmaster dismisses the two teachers due the school hasn’t enough gotten enough money to keep them. Furthermore Brad wants to punish Thomas for his betrayment.
“Betrayed” – a book with an open end.
deales - deals

Okay, anfangs hab ich die Sachen unterstrichen die ich geändert habe, aber später war ich dann zu faul.
Okay hier ein paar deiner Fehler: Du setzt zu viele Kommas (Engländer setzen kaum Kommas)
Arbeite an deinem Style.
Schau dir die Anfänge an - At a meeting
because Thomas told - because Thomas has told them this...or so ähnlich.

Ich hoffe es hilft dir weiter.

 

[Buffy_Summers]

Vielen dank für deine Hilfe....Nicht viele Kommas? das ist ein Schlag für mich...ich nehem sie doch so gerne ^^ Danke für deine Tips. Das einzige problem ist jetzt nur, dass dies alles nicht länger als 180 Wörter sein soll, sodass ich manches noch etwas kürzen muss.

 

[Ling]

The book “Betrayed” was writtenb by Carl Taylor. It deals about Thomas Walker a new pupil at the boarding school “Hartland”. He gets to meet the new teacher John Clay and experiences the cruel welcoming ritual at the school which means receiving a shower while asleep in bed by some cruel student. Bradley stands out as the rudest of them all. He fors for the school pub and keeps most of the money for himseld. The German teacher Peter Hansen tries to reveal Bradley’s doing. At a meeting the headmaster desides, that the earned money of the pub should be checked by a comitee. In order to cover his criminal actions Bradley deals with drugs to earn money. However Hansen and Clay get to know this because Thomas told them the truth about Bradley. But the headmaster can't do anything just because there is no proof.
Finally the headmaster dismisses the two teachers due the school hasn’t enough gotten enough money to keep them. Furthermore Brad wants to punish Thomas for his betrayment.
“Betrayed” – a book with an open end.


Das sind exact 180 Wörter

 

[Buffy_Summers]

Wow danke für deine Mühe. *bussl*
Eine Frage habe ich aber noch zu dem Satz: Finally the headmaster dismisses the two teachers due the school hasn’t enough gotten enough money to keep them.

Dieses due...was bedeutet es?

 

[Ling]

due ist gleich bedeutend mit because.
oder kann aber auch mit dadurch dass, übersetzt werden.

 

[Buffy_Summers]

Danke für die Erklärung - die Vokabl war mir bisher völlig fremd.